I’m beyond excited to be a Pitch Wars mentor for the first time this year! My career was greatly impacted during my time as a Pitch Wars mentee, when I was able to work with two amazingly talented mentors (hello, Lori Goldstein and Evelyn Skye!) to strengthen Firsts and get it ready for the agent round. I learned so much and grew a lot as a writer, and I came out of my shell, social media wise (I had previously been a Twitter lurker, but thanks to the welcoming Pitch Wars community, I shed a lot of that shyness). Shortly after the contest, I signed with my amazing agent, Kathleen Rushall, and had a book deal by the end of the year!
(If you’re interested in hearing about my experience as mentee, click here!)
Me! Don’t let the smile fool you… I want all the angsty, dark, dramatic stories!
So, a little bit about me! I’m a proud Canadian girl and I live in London, Ontario with my husband and my beloved senior Chihuahua (aka the star of my Instagram and basically my life). I’m a former model and lifelong fashion addict. I love walking in the woods, thrift store shopping, wearing red lipstick, and indulging in nachos basically any day, any time. I write YA contemporary books. My debut novel, Firsts, came out in January and was recently nominated as a YALSA Best Fiction for Young Adults pick. It’s the story of a high school senior named Mercedes who has an open-door policy when it comes to her bedroom, but only if the guy is a virgin. I’m also the author of a series of short stories, the Boys Tell All, sharing the perspectives of ten virgin guys from Firsts.
My Critique Style
I focus on both larger issues– plot, theme, characters, voice, and pacing– and smaller details, like sentence structure, misplaced commas, and overused words (my crutch word is “look,” in case you were curious). I’ll let you know the elements I love about your book, but I won’t shy away from letting you know what I think needs improvement. I’ll work extremely hard for you, and I want to collaborate with a mentee who isn’t afraid to dig in and make the big and small revisions needed to make a manuscript stronger. I want to work with someone who will think critically and kill darlings for the overall good of the pages. It’s your story, and I’m here to help you make it the best book it can be. I’m very open to bouncing ideas around and will do everything I can to help. I also want to make this fun for you! I’m pretty laid-back and approachable, and I want you to feel like you can come to me with any questions or concerns, any time.
My WisH List
I’m mentoring YA, and I want ALLLLL the contemporary! Give me your flawed girls and boys, your messy relationships, your morally questionable decisions, your heartache and big mistakes. I love a good antihero– a protagonist who isn’t traditionally likeable, but someone you can still make me feel for. I love to see diversity in any form. Give me your dark, your edgy, your gritty, your raw emotions, your drama– maybe I’m a masochist, but feel free to break my heart! I’m not afraid of controversy and I’m definitely your girl for pushing boundaries.
I’m very invested in what feels real, and I don’t need a happy ending to be satisfied with a story. I’m fascinated by stories with an element of mystery and intrigue, where multiple layers exist and unraveling is required (complicated and twisty = me reading past my bedtime). I’m a huge fan of unreliable narrators and their secrets and lies.
I also enjoy creativity and inventiveness with storytelling– alternating timelines, unique perspectives (ie. second person, a la We Are The Goldens by Donna Reinhardt), and stories told in different and unconventional ways (letters, diary entries, lists, etc). I also like to laugh… I think a book that evokes the greatest amount of feels contains both humor and heartache.
I adore character-driven boy POV stories that feel incredibly authentic (think Carrie Mesrobian’s Sex & Violence or Perfectly Good White Boy).
Above all, the most important thing is voice. I swoon for voice. Voice will keep me reading, even if the plot needs a lot of work. Voice is what sets your story apart.
To get a sense of the kind of work I gravitate toward, here are some of my favorite YA books:
Anything and everything by Courtney Summers and Amy Reed
The Truth About Alice by Jennifer Mathieu
Tease by Amanda Maciel
Fault Line by Christa Desir
Uses For Boys by Erica Lorraine Scheidt
Wink Poppy Midnight by April Genevieve Tucholke
I’m not the best mentor for…
Fantasy, magical realism, sci-fi, and horror. I don’t read widely enough in these genres to be an effective mentor, nor have I ever written in them (unless you count my cringe-worthy high school attempt at high fantasy)!
Abby thinks you’re awesome. So do I!
I’m so very excited to get to know you all. If you’re on the fence about hitting “send,” know that I was in your position too, and I can honestly say my career wouldn’t be where it is today if I hadn’t taken the chance. You have nothing to lose and everything to gain!
I’m very active on Twitter, so if you have any questions or just want to chat, please follow me @laurellizabeth!
Check out the other mentor wishlists here:
Powered by… Mister Linky’s Magical Widgets.